
Body这部分的内容不管分成3段还是四段,内在的结构都差不多,都是
重要的是内在逻辑,写的时候不必过渡注重细节,先理清思路,按照大纲先补充关键词句。不要停!!!修改可以放在最后~
举个非常具体的例子,像下面那个论点:
"Eli Whitney's cotton gin made life harder on African American slaves."
“Eli Whitney的棉花机让非洲裔美国奴隶的生活变得更加艰难。”
就可以通过这样几个方向来进行论证:
"The success of cotton made it harder for slaves to purchase their own freedom."
“棉花的成功使奴隶更难以购买自己的自由。”
Ex: "Many northern slaves were in danger of being kidnapped and brought down south to work in the cotton fields."
“许多北方奴隶有被绑架的危险,并被带到南方去棉田工作。”
Ex: "In 1790, before the cotton gin, slaves in America totaled about 700,000. In 1810, after the cotton gin had been adopted, slaves totaled about 1.2 million, a 70% increase."
“1790年,在棉花机之前,美国的奴隶总数约为70万。1810年,在采用轧棉机之后,奴隶总数约为120万,增加了70%。”
这三个方向,每个方向都可做一个段落的中心论点
正文第1段Body Paragraph 1:
1.Begin with a topic sentence——就是先写主题句,对应大纲中Strongest point
主题句应该准确客观,比如说:
"The Great Gatsby's three central themes are loneliness, the corruption of wealth, and the loss of great love,"
“了不起的盖茨比的三个中心主题是孤独、财富和爱情。”
2.Extension sentence——拓展句对应原大纲中的Introduction,进一步拓展了主题句中的观点并引出论证:
例句:
Somebody suggests/argues (author,year)......
Despite the focus on xxx, it appears that ...., while ......
3.Details-对应Examples与并对例子进行Explanation,举例说明一下,如果想混字数,还可以把之前别人的研究和差异拿来鞭尸一下~
例句:
This distinction is further exemplified in studies using …An example of this is the study carried out by Smith (2004) in which …
4.Closing sentence-对这一段做一个总结,并尝试下Transition:
例句:
considers the implications of …critically examines the view that …proposes a new methodology for …examines the relationship between …
正文第2段Body Paragraph 2:
1.Transition——应总结上一段的主要观点,并引入的新观点。可能的过渡结构包括:
例句:
Not only ...but also...
Besides..., also...
In addition
2.其余部分采用与第1段相同的结构。
正文第3段Body Paragraph 3:
最重要的东西往往放在最后,这一段你要谈谈最重要的支持细节/理由,方便文章以“ bang”的一下结束。当然段落的开头我们仍需要过渡:
例句:
Above all else...
Most significantly...
2.其余部分采用与第1段相同的结构。
最后,做出结论Conclusion Paragraph
这部分内容就相对简单啦,不需要添加新的观点和内容,就是把论文body部分的内容再进行复述下,堪称最方便按照模板直接做选词填空的部分啦~当然直接复制粘贴是不行滴
